The song that i was singing was 'Whole' From 'Flaw'

So, not bad. You're sustaining notes. I don't know the song personally so I can't comment on accuracy.

But as for your tone and projection, you can ease up a little on the volume and force you're using, especially when just singing raw with no system backing you. Your goal isn't to be loud here, in a live setting, your equipment will be taking care of that. But rather maintaining notes and breath. I hear you still running out of breath, or close to it, so keep practicing breathing exercises along side singing.

A good method is elongating your diaphragm. Just lay on a flat surface like a floor or something and practice deep breathing, right into your belly. Learn to hold it, release it slow, get those skills built.